Repetition (Song Adaptation – First Try)

Here it is, guys – a bit rough, I understand.  It has some noise from the breeze blowing about the window and whatnot, but I’m pretty happy with it, at the moment.  I may try to record a better quality version when I get a bit better handle on this whole sound manipulation gig, but this will do for now.  I hope you enjoy it :D

Repetition is…
~
The dismemberment of the mind
And the atrophy of the soul.
~
“I will remember to endeavor to never forget
To follow tradition without thought, without question…
~
…without reflection of inclination or reason…”
You’ll write this 100 times, or it’s treason.
You’ll live this 200 times before your season
~
—My father’s weary eyes melt inward.
All hail the death of the majority’s hero!
Surely he knew exactly
what his father’s fathers had done—
~
“…And I won’t ask whether I’m out of line.”
As long as you cage someone else, you’ll be fine.
~
So light the lies of compromise,
then watch them all blow out like flies,
one by one, you setting sons.
~
But don’t forget that still inside
you’re kissing all sweet hells in life,
you’re full of rage, and yet so young.
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12 CommentsLeave a comment

  1. Nice Dr j

    gosh aren’t you multi-talented

    • I try :D So I take it you liked it?

  2. that’s very inspiring!
    Happy Thursday!
    Happy Mother’s Day to Your Lovely Wife!

    • hehe, thank you, dear Jingle :) Happy Thursday to you, as well!

  3. This is very nice, it includes a huge sense of professionalism….

    See this piece: http://ediomoudofia.blogspot.com/2010/05/locked-in-dungeon.html

    • Thank you very much, Edi :)

      It does me good to hear such kind words from you, as I try to carry myself at all times with as tremendous professionalism and respect as I may muster.

  4. very truthfully written. i dont believe in following blindly but i can understand your words.

    • Oh, I don’t believe in such a farce, either. That’s why I wrote this…it’s a rather sardonic lament.

      Thanks for stopping by :)

  5. really missing the Doc
    he must be out on housecalls :(

  6. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/25/brian-and-tara-miller-u-rock-14th-anniversary-celebration-post/

    please visit Brian to wish his 14th marriage annivesary.
    Thanks a lot!

  7. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/07/25/thursday-poets-rally-week-25-poetry-awards/

    three poetry awards,
    plus two general awards,
    enjoy!
    thanks for the contribution! ;)

  8. how are you?
    many things have been changed ever since you left us..
    welcome back any time

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/09/08/thursday-poets-rally-week-28-september-9-15/

    u can link in an old poem…
    we have a new poetry blog and welcome to the open house party.
    Cheers!


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